Monday, January 21, 2013

Sara Rodriguez-Workshop 1: "Incident Report"



Sara Angela Rodriguez
A415-002/Chambers
Workshop Group 2
01/15/2013

Incident Report

Martin 'n Phil be playin sum football. Martin be playing fo' da yella team an Phillip be on dat blu team and they both rushed at dat ball, Martin’s team had the ball and he wanted to score an Philip wanted to jack the ball from Martin. They both tried snatching that ball out the air but Martin gave Philip that burn. Philip tried to bring that man down but Martin swung and gave Philip that neck.  Martin popped him on the real. It couldn’t been no accident. Martin had beef with Phillip and wanted to lay that man out.

That’s not entirely true. Yes, Martin and Phillip were never really good friends, but they were playing a game of football together: Martin was on the yellow team and Phillip was on the blue team. Martin’s team had possession of the ball and was trying to score a touchdown. Phillip’s team was down by two and Phillip wanted desperately to stop Martin’s team from scoring the touchdown so he planned to stage an interception. The play began. Martin and Phillip both lunged for the ball. Martin caught it. Phillip leapt towards Martin who ended up elbowing him in the neck. I don’t know if it was an accident or if it was on purpose—he didn’t look like he was aiming for anything or anyone in particular when he elbowed—but Martin made contact with Phillip. He elbowed him so hard that Phillip went flying, hit against the door, and went down. Coach Trey saw it too.

Coach Trey ain’t seen shit. That boy was hiding in the shed when the game whistle holla'd, creepin’ in that bathroom thru-out da game , and only showed his scary face when ya boy Phil was rushed out to that hospital.

That…that…that’s not…true!  I saw everything from the overview! It looked like Coach said something and then walked towards the locker room area and sat on one of the benches we sit when we break from practice. He was watching everything with this sad slump that kinda made me feel like he was tired or like he was depressed or that he had just given up or….

Trick, ain’t nobody ask you dat. All they want to know is about Martin and Phill.

I’m getting to that. I just wanted to let them know that Coach was watching. But anyways, they started playing, someone on the blue team tossed the ball, Martin and Phil went for the ball, and then next thing I know Martin is in the touchdown area dancing and celebrating and Phil is on the floor. It all happened so fast.

Nah! That’s bull shit. This gurl wasn’t even there. She got her shit all jacked up. Ight, Ma’, see what had happened wuz dat mah home boys Martin an’ Phillip was sportin’ on dat field playing some football. Mart be playing fo' da yella team an Philly Phil be on dat blu team and they both rushed at dat ball, ya dig? Nah see Martrooni had da bawl an’ he wuz tryna get in da TD yaherd? And Phil wuz tryna hop up fo a pick 6. So dey goin at it right? Mart snatches that ball mid-air and when that boy Philip tried to bring that man down, Martin swung and gave Philip that elbow. Erybody know Phil had charged Mart cuz Mart had slept with Philly’s gurl. Phil had snaps with that man but he wuz too soft. Mart laid that man out on the turf in secs.

That has nothing to do with anything that was going on in the game and therefore has no relevance in this discussion. It’s true that those boys were always getting themselves into trouble, they always turned everything into a competition, and they weren’t the best of friends, but what happened here today has nothing to do with that. We have to focus on the incident at hand. The best person to explain what happened is Coach Trey. Talk to him. He’ll clear everything up.

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Those boys don’t listen. The field was wet, they didn’t have cleats, and it was starting to drizzle. But they didn’t listen. They never do. They always do what they want. Now look where that’s gotten them: one in the hospital and the other on his way to jail. The gym was open, the basketballs and goals were set up, but they wanted to play football. I was through trying to negotiate with them so I went to go sit under the covering and watched them from there. Everything was fine when it started to pour and I had to run to the shed to close it up before the water got in and ruined the equipment. I came back and everything was still fine. I watched for another ten minutes and then got up to go to the bathroom. When I came back I saw Phil knocked out on the floor gasping for breath with his team screaming at Martin who was dancing in the end zone. Next thing I know, here we are.

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Incident Report:

Student A was thrown to the floor after receiving a heavy blow to the neck by Student B. Student A was pronounced dead upon reaching the hospital. Cause of death: crushed trachea, failed respiration, and closed head injury (TBI).  Student B is to be charged with involuntary manslaughter.

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